Lung sounds more like he’s saying “Boo!” through an echoey microphone than being a distorted draconic rumble of “You”. Other than that and the Oni thing (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oni) this seemed like a pretty fine read.
I know you get a lot of criticism, which can be helpful in improving, but I just want you to know that even a decade later this is still being enjoyed for the first time and I am extremely grateful that this exists.
You keep pronouncing “Oni Lee” wrong. The name is bilingual, so the “ni” is pronounced “nee,” as in ‘O-nee-lee.”
Lung sounds more like he’s saying “Boo!” through an echoey microphone than being a distorted draconic rumble of “You”. Other than that and the Oni thing (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oni) this seemed like a pretty fine read.
I know you get a lot of criticism, which can be helpful in improving, but I just want you to know that even a decade later this is still being enjoyed for the first time and I am extremely grateful that this exists.