Hive 5.8

Narrator: Snagger

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3 Responses to Hive 5.8

  1. Thebes says:

    You keep pronouncing “Oni Lee” wrong. The name is bilingual, so the “ni” is pronounced “nee,” as in ‘O-nee-lee.”

  2. Rafinius says:

    Lung sounds more like he’s saying “Boo!” through an echoey microphone than being a distorted draconic rumble of “You”. Other than that and the Oni thing ( this seemed like a pretty fine read.

  3. Cabal says:

    I know you get a lot of criticism, which can be helpful in improving, but I just want you to know that even a decade later this is still being enjoyed for the first time and I am extremely grateful that this exists.

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