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Tough chapter to draw! You got through the Simurgh POV okay, and that looked like the hard part. I felt some of your other voices were hit and miss, but Teacher, for one, you absolutely nailed. Most of the protecterate as well. Nice work!
I feel like you got better as the chapter went on (or perhaps I got more used to your style). By the end I was just caught up in the story, everything just sounded natural.
This is a great chapter, but… “Birg cade.”
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Twenty Ten Dark
by Seismic Themes